May I Just Say...
My good sir, In your apparent first attempt to do something different, I must say you have amazingly surpassed success. I haven't heard something with so much variation in a long time. Thank you for brightening up my day... Just out of curiosity, what program do you use? -TJH
Cool dude! -TJH
This song has promise for flash! It gas some groovy beats dude.
One thing I think would be cool: More Center structure...
In other words, the quarter bass and synth saw give great sound to the song, but it needs a storyline. To me, music, in all of its glory, has a story to tell. This song seems like a Dr. Suess story. Has great detail, but kind of lacks conflict provoking a climax.
Try giving some extra melody lines, or, if you think you have enough, give those melody lines some structure. for example, synth strings, or possibly a synth bass that gives the song some character. Really explore! I can see this song someday appearing on a flash movie already! -TJH
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